@Wsteria it's fun to read for now, I just think it's going fast and there is too much tell, not show - but in 180k words for the seven years? I knew that much going in

also it's your first try at HP fanfic? It's already better than so much of the fandom

@Hiraelle *nod* My fanfic style is one-draft no-edits long-drabbles, so far, which isn't for everyone. This fic becomes somewhat more of a traditional narrative in later books, because that's where the canon divergence is, but it might not be your cup of tea anyroad.

@Wsteria oh I'll continue it bc it's nice to read and some stuff made me laugh

like that :
" "Maybe Headmaster Dumbledore knows about it and, um, indulges it? Like Hagrid. Hagrid does stuff that's pretty, er."

The other kids sitting around the table nodded. Hagrid did do things that were er. "

I mean I *tend* to prefer detailed fics? but it's not an absolute

(I do think that if we didn't already know the characters it wouldn't work but well - it's fanfiction, we know the characters)

@Hiraelle (Mostly it's because I got so incredibly frustrated with fifty very good stories that only cover the first half of Harry's first year on an interesting premise, because they rewrite every scene in canon? And then end in Unfinished Fic Hell. So I decided instead to rewrite no canon scenes unless I absolutely had to and race forward to the end as fast as I could. *waves hands vaguely*)

@Wsteria haha yeah I know what you mean
honestly I prefer what you're doing than canon rehash + unfinished fic

@Hiraelle Woo. Happy reading~