@Dalmaty
A Honor Roll c'est normal maj A ?

"in a too bad condition" tu peux juste mettre "in too bad condition"

"let the coffin ... open" ça marche mais tu peux aussi utiliser l'expression "she decided to have an open-casket funeral"

"what was done to him" -> "what had been done to him" (sinon ça sonne comme si c'était en train de se passer)

"all Black people" c'est normal la maj ?

"her son's murderer trial" -> "her son's murderer's trial" ou mieux "the trial of her son's murderer"

"despite what was to her son" il manque un mot ?

"she said she has not spent" -> ok si elle est toujours en vie, sinon "she said she had"